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Imaginary Danger!

Imaginary Danger |Writing | T3 W2

By: Chris

I was riding 4 helium balloons high above earth when… a massive jumbo jet! speeding like a jet coming out of a battle field! I quickly moved to dodge the jet but… I don't know how I did it do I have a steering system? I looked around but I haven't so I started to think maybe i'm like Luke Skywalker?. With the force but how? Well anyway it was Friday at 3pm also my name  well I don't know. But I can’t believe I stole these weather balloons filled up with helium from a weather station! But I don't think I should return until the “Heat” cools down. What I mean by “Heat” is there are probably 40 Officers waiting for me to arrest me because I stole the balloons.  So as soon as I sat down on the balloons. I started to slip, then ‘Ahhhhh!’ I screamed as I started to fall like a anvil  I continued to scream like a little girl getting there Lollipop taken of them. But when I started to get worried I started to hear a loud sound. a helicopter come out of a cloud making a hole in it.  the pilot could see me falling and screaming like a girl and then with. His so called “expert skills” He opened one of the doors then I fell in hitting my head on the floor. As I started to get up and I ‘I think i’m bleeding’ The pilot said ‘well can't help you there’ then my arm started to bleed rapidly. I started to look around desperately trying to find a First Aid kit I. saw something red and I started to get happy to see it! But when I opened it there was only one Tiny,Tiny,Tiny Bandaid I put it on but it didn’t. Cover the whole bleed.  I was shivering in shock in the back seat of the helicopter. I had no idea but we have landed! I was so happy, But there was a Big,Big,Big Problem. The helicopter that saved me was a Weather Heli so i was right back at the weather station and when I went outside to run I was welcomed by aimed Tasers and Police Cars, So i had no way to run. As they circled me in and two Officers ran over to me and put me in cuffs, So for 3 Years I was in Prison and it wasn’t that fun.

SERIOUSLY CHILDREN DON'T DO WHAT “Mystery Kid” DID PROMISE ME YOU WANT! -Chris