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Monday, July 31, 2017

Awesome Writing


Netflix

On Saturday I slept in until 8:48 I hoped out of bed opened, the door and Left my room to go to the living room. and walked tiredly over to the Computer straight away then  I logged in swiftly  and went onto. Firefox then i went onto Netflix and searched for something to watch i found Star Wars: The Clone Wars and for the whole Holidays. I was just on Netflix watching the same thing over & over again, Until the astonishing scenes was all finished and my eyes felt weird and i was very tired.



What do you think i can improve on?

2 comments:

  1. Amazing work on your professional comenting

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  2. I really like this story and think it is a really really amazing recount about Netflix. I really like the Star Wars clone wars series as well and once again I think this is amazing.

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