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Thursday, September 22, 2016

The Wanted man

The Wanted Man
His description-He has a purple hat-he looks frightened when he sees someone-he likes to stay in the sunshine-and he is ice cold and last he watched his bird flew away from him.

There was a man wearing a purple hat he always liked the sunshine but he stayed in the shade so he couldn't been seen or arrested but sometimes he would quickly run in the sunshine and then back into the shade but… if you see him please report to western sheriff

[just so you know this is a fake story/short story so if you think it is real it is not real ok]

1 comment:

  1. Hi Chris, Teegan here. what a nice short story you made up. what do you think you could do to improve it? make it longer perhaps.see you soon.(im coming for a visit.:))

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